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Title: Make Them Hear You
Pairing/Characters: Junmyeon/Jongdae, guest starring Baekhyun, Kyungsoo, et al.
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 41,142
Summary: Perfectly ordinary Kim Junmyeon makes friends, grows up, and becomes an unlikely revolutionary.
Notes: Originally posted here. Big thanks to Linda and Gwynn for betaing and bearing with my flail, Annie for giving me the idea in the first place, and EO tlist for all the handholding. Title from this song.
Warnings: brief mind control, off-screen human experimentation, internment camps, hypothetical genocide (But I promise it's not as scary as it sounds! XD)

( You have to stop singing or bad things will happen to you...)

Date: 2014-06-24 01:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] m0ssbutt.livejournal.com
This fic was actually amazing!!!!!!
The way you introduced the world which only slightly differs from our own, and the sort of slow and believeable escalations in regards to how Sirens were being dealt with by different countries meant that I was totally sucked in, it felt really realistic. Also the way the situation was escalating for Joonmyun and the pressures of the outside world for him, his moral compass vs. his own fears, man everything was great. Your characters were fantastic and I was so excited reading to see when the next Exo member would turn up (I squealed a little when the first contact Joonmun had was Chanyeol 'cause he's my second bias after Chen and I was like "heck yeahhh!!")
My heart was actually pounding when he was at the camp and waiting to tell the others they were going to be broken out, I don't know if a fic has ever done that for me before, books certainly have, but I usually don't like to compare fic and published work but this story was so solid??? Like awesome plot, good characters, well explained, well thought out. I have died and gone to heaven. Anyway I'm sorry if this comment is absolute trash I don't even know how to explain my feelings right now I'm just a big mess of excitement because I went into this like oh cool a new OTP fic great! and came out of it like DAMN THAT WAS COOL I CAN'T BELIEVE THAT WAS A FIC WITH MY OTP I LIVE IN A BEAUTIFUL AGE!
Thank you so much for sharing this!!!!!!! And sorry I can only comment on here??? I don't have a dreamwidth and can't..figure it out??

Date: 2015-05-05 06:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fairyminseok.livejournal.com
I finally got around to reading this (i say that a lot to you) in the throes of sobbing over my own fic writing and I have to say I think this (and the little sequel extra) is probably my favourite fic from you this was just so
idk I love this kind of story and I love suchen and I love the whole sirens idea and everything about it ;;;;
bless you

Date: 2015-05-05 12:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sparklepox.livejournal.com
I'm really happy to hear that since I fought with this fic an awful lot but people never seemed to like it that much. XD ♥ Thank you for taking the time to read it, and I'm happy your liked it!

Date: 2015-05-05 12:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fairyminseok.livejournal.com
Every thing you write is amazing and though I'm still trickling my way through it all I hold your fics so close and dear <3

Date: 2015-06-06 08:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kariredlock.livejournal.com
This fic was absolutely amazing, and had me entirely engrossed way too late into the night, when I probably should've been sleeping since I had/have work tomorrow 8'D ah well

I absolutely LOVE the idea of voices having that sort of power, because, in a much lesser way, for me especially, they kind of do 8'D music (and especially music from some of the idols featured in this fic) really influences me and my moods/emotions xD All day I've thought about who else was probably in a Siren camp somewhere, thinking of all the amazing singers the Kpop industry has 8'D idk, this world and these ideas just really resonated with me! It was a super cool idea and I'm so glad you wrote it <3 (and so glad I was looking for suchen fics and happened to find it LOL)

also, i am just going to pretend that Jinki and Ryeowook also made it out and everyone was okay >:C pls don't tell me otherwise or my poor little heart will break ;o;

anyways, thank you so much for the lovely read <3 I wish it was actual book-length with chapters and everything--it was seriously that awesome <3

Date: 2015-06-08 02:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sparklepox.livejournal.com
I'm sorry to have kept you up late, but I'm very glad you liked it. Thank you for commenting!

(And if it helps, in my head, a lot of other people did manage to escape and eventually join them too.)

Date: 2015-06-08 07:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kariredlock.livejournal.com
It's fine 8D I'm usually up late anyways! But I told myself I would go to bed early and then I started reading and was just like "lol nevermind" 8'D

That's good ;u; you weren't specific about who all got out and who got left behind besides the main ones, so I was just kind of imagining Jinki running around in the woods all confused LOL

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